Thursday, May 7, 2020
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Awesome Lachie! I especially liked your Myth. Interesting Tawhirimatea shouted Peace to Ruaumoko. That tells me another God was nearby, Rongomatane, who is the God of Peace (and vege gardens), probably watching and calming. The four winds are also called Nga Hau e Wha. Ka pai Lachie.
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ReplyDeleteWhat fantastic work you have done. You thought about and planned your writing really well, it was an exciting story to read with lots of added detail.
It shows that you loved doing this work. Well done.
Tino pai Lachie! This is such an action packed story! I love that word 'retaliate' - the perfect word for what Ruaumoko did to the earth. Your imagination and passion for a good story really shines through.
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